Feedback on my Feedback

After hearing the feedback from my pitch I have decided to slightly refine my idea. Where I was going to use neon paint in the dark to give the Illusion of brightness I have decided due to the difficulty of filming in the dark to utilise the headlight of a car to get the effects of professional lighting. I also hit the wall of me being in the band and having to replace myself with someone or finding a way around this. At this time I am trying to find a way for my band to not lose its identity but still not feature the front man. I will keep posting as updates in this occur.